tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444371246527030766.post1779852932944384989..comments2023-01-30T08:11:13.732-08:00Comments on Poetryman: True Loves KissMike Sutcliffehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17306691004504818181noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444371246527030766.post-9965186690950053172012-01-18T20:48:29.932-08:002012-01-18T20:48:29.932-08:00such a captivating expression you have placed in t...such a captivating expression you have placed in this piece...lovely write. ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444371246527030766.post-49343118177857461692012-01-18T09:50:42.316-08:002012-01-18T09:50:42.316-08:00Ah, love. A masterpiece, Poetryman, a masterpiece!...Ah, love. A masterpiece, Poetryman, a masterpiece!<br /><br />:)Bradley Howingtonhttp://www.bradleyhowington.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444371246527030766.post-28142232658325296532012-01-17T23:21:19.279-08:002012-01-17T23:21:19.279-08:00Ah!! The kiss of love.. and if its the first kiss,...Ah!! The kiss of love.. and if its the first kiss, then the its the sweetest tinge of unknown and then knowing the unknown... I liked the soft melody your words bring on to me...<br /><br />Shashi<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2012/01/whispers-haiku-on-how-i-write-poetry.html<br />At twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444371246527030766.post-43141972092454218812012-01-17T16:58:38.778-08:002012-01-17T16:58:38.778-08:00A such a taste I have not had, but you make it wan...A such a taste I have not had, but you make it wanted by this lad. Great verse!Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444371246527030766.post-65222531487633156372012-01-17T16:58:04.059-08:002012-01-17T16:58:04.059-08:00Tender and beautiful write!Tender and beautiful write!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444371246527030766.post-16266427374538576362012-01-17T15:24:17.710-08:002012-01-17T15:24:17.710-08:00What a kiss it is ~
I enjoyed this ~What a kiss it is ~ <br /><br />I enjoyed this ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444371246527030766.post-55370928631477094822012-01-17T14:18:06.165-08:002012-01-17T14:18:06.165-08:00Such a tender and romantic write! Beautiful!
@Aud...Such a tender and romantic write! Beautiful!<br /><br />@AudreyHowittAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444371246527030766.post-82677033720114211762012-01-17T13:20:51.538-08:002012-01-17T13:20:51.538-08:00you my dear have just won me over! I am following!...you my dear have just won me over! I am following! What a sweetly seductive read! nice penning!!! :)<br /><br />my offering:<br />http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2012/01/17/we-make-love/Kellie Elmorehttp://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444371246527030766.post-45576259854213025752012-01-17T13:04:17.873-08:002012-01-17T13:04:17.873-08:00"a swirling maelstrom of carnal pleasure
I si..."a swirling maelstrom of carnal pleasure<br />I sip from the cup of her deepest treasure"<br /><br />Amen.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444371246527030766.post-24159948075162374772012-01-17T12:14:53.030-08:002012-01-17T12:14:53.030-08:00hmmm..sipping from that cup of treasure...a carnal...hmmm..sipping from that cup of treasure...a carnal pleasure for sure..love the passion and devotion in this..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444371246527030766.post-45328341128016411552012-01-17T11:36:44.311-08:002012-01-17T11:36:44.311-08:00Mike..you own these romantic ballads! This is fant...Mike..you own these romantic ballads! This is fantastic...but if I may be so bold, IMHO I'd drop the willing before slave. Lends a bit of a stutter to the piece and your meaning is still crystal clear with out. Or just go with "her willing slave" I tend to offer unwanted advice only when I'm found blushing! ;) Hot write, PoetTashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444371246527030766.post-14087270322949424092012-01-17T09:48:12.701-08:002012-01-17T09:48:12.701-08:00mawwage....haha...made me think of the princess br...mawwage....haha...made me think of the princess bride straight off....i do understand this...and sometimes slavery is not so bad...i like how you touched on multiple senses as it is that engaging...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444371246527030766.post-89221925444816031312012-01-11T07:48:50.987-08:002012-01-11T07:48:50.987-08:00wow too much passion for the afternoon .....I love...wow too much passion for the afternoon .....I loved it ! Thank you xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10624767707167052328noreply@blogger.com