How did it happen
the start of forever
I closed my eyes
thinking of never
One at a time
my days passed me by
the past still with me
living the lie
It felt like a dream
I did not know why
I must be asleep
my eyes closed tight
I woke from my slumber
you lay by my side
a vision appeared
my eyes opened wide
As time passed by
I finally could see
that forever was real
it had started for me
Poetryman
Copyright © 2011 by Mike Sutcliffe
Wonderfully written.. It happens..I know..
ReplyDeleteYou are an incredible Poet
ReplyDeleteI am also a poet and I love your style
and your numerous inspirations.
I would like to tap in to what motivates you
to write this many poems in such a short time :)
I was the one who commented as 'anonymous'
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I follow you On twitter and saw your appreciation.
It is definitely my pleasure.
But I still really want to know what inspires
you to write as often as you do so well...Thanks
moving, vivid imagery, Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeletei really like this. the rhymes are very nice too, they don't seem forced though they fit a form. The last line makes me happy :)
ReplyDeletelove it, superb imagery.
ReplyDeletePlease join us with a free verse or any poem you wish to share,
Have fun making poetic friends.
Blessings!
Looking forward to seeing you among us!
xoxox
A Nice thing to read ...
ReplyDeleteThat was simply amazing
Take a look on mine ...
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/07/27/true-beauty/
Happy Rally !!!
Very philosophical. I like the idea of awakening to forever. I really enjoyed this.
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