Wednesday, 11 January 2012

True Loves Kiss

New found depths that grip me there,
her subtle scent drifts through the air,
consuming me with passionate rage,
we are bound forever ~ I am her slave.

Melting together, becoming one,
our bodies symmetry a single tone.
Please linger still, I must savour all,
to capture her within my soul.

Drifting now, all time has stopped,
our inhibitions have all been lost,
a swirling maelstrom of carnal pleasure,
I sip from the cup of her deepest treasure.

The possibilities become limitless,
when you’ve tasted the lips ~ of true loves kiss.

Poetryman
Copyright © 2012 by Mike Sutcliffe
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13 comments:

  1. Unknown11 January 2012 at 07:48

    wow too much passion for the afternoon .....I loved it ! Thank you x

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  2. Brian Miller17 January 2012 at 09:48

    mawwage....haha...made me think of the princess bride straight off....i do understand this...and sometimes slavery is not so bad...i like how you touched on multiple senses as it is that engaging...

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  3. Tashtoo17 January 2012 at 11:36

    Mike..you own these romantic ballads! This is fantastic...but if I may be so bold, IMHO I'd drop the willing before slave. Lends a bit of a stutter to the piece and your meaning is still crystal clear with out. Or just go with "her willing slave" I tend to offer unwanted advice only when I'm found blushing! ;) Hot write, Poet

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  4. Claudia17 January 2012 at 12:14

    hmmm..sipping from that cup of treasure...a carnal pleasure for sure..love the passion and devotion in this..

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  5. Buddah Moskowitz17 January 2012 at 13:04

    "a swirling maelstrom of carnal pleasure
    I sip from the cup of her deepest treasure"

    Amen.

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  6. Kellie Elmore17 January 2012 at 13:20

    you my dear have just won me over! I am following! What a sweetly seductive read! nice penning!!! :)

    my offering:
    http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2012/01/17/we-make-love/

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  7. Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger17 January 2012 at 14:18

    Such a tender and romantic write! Beautiful!

    @AudreyHowitt

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  8. Scarlet17 January 2012 at 15:24

    What a kiss it is ~

    I enjoyed this ~

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  9. ayala17 January 2012 at 16:58

    Tender and beautiful write!

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  10. Pat Hatt17 January 2012 at 16:58

    A such a taste I have not had, but you make it wanted by this lad. Great verse!

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  11. Shashidhar Sharma17 January 2012 at 23:21

    Ah!! The kiss of love.. and if its the first kiss, then the its the sweetest tinge of unknown and then knowing the unknown... I liked the soft melody your words bring on to me...

    Shashi

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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  12. Bradley Howington18 January 2012 at 09:50

    Ah, love. A masterpiece, Poetryman, a masterpiece!

    :)

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  13. Unknown18 January 2012 at 20:48

    such a captivating expression you have placed in this piece...lovely write. ~ Rose

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