Wednesday, 11 January 2012

True Loves Kiss

New found depths that grip me there,
her subtle scent drifts through the air,
consuming me with passionate rage,
we are bound forever ~ I am her slave.

Melting together, becoming one,
our bodies symmetry a single tone.
Please linger still, I must savour all,
to capture her within my soul.

Drifting now, all time has stopped,
our inhibitions have all been lost,
a swirling maelstrom of carnal pleasure,
I sip from the cup of her deepest treasure.

The possibilities become limitless,
when you’ve tasted the lips ~ of true loves kiss.

Copyright © 2012 by Mike Sutcliffe


  1. wow too much passion for the afternoon .....I loved it ! Thank you x

  2. mawwage....haha...made me think of the princess bride straight off....i do understand this...and sometimes slavery is not so bad...i like how you touched on multiple senses as it is that engaging...

  3. own these romantic ballads! This is fantastic...but if I may be so bold, IMHO I'd drop the willing before slave. Lends a bit of a stutter to the piece and your meaning is still crystal clear with out. Or just go with "her willing slave" I tend to offer unwanted advice only when I'm found blushing! ;) Hot write, Poet

  4. hmmm..sipping from that cup of treasure...a carnal pleasure for the passion and devotion in this..

  5. "a swirling maelstrom of carnal pleasure
    I sip from the cup of her deepest treasure"


  6. you my dear have just won me over! I am following! What a sweetly seductive read! nice penning!!! :)

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  7. Such a tender and romantic write! Beautiful!


  8. What a kiss it is ~

    I enjoyed this ~

  9. Tender and beautiful write!

  10. A such a taste I have not had, but you make it wanted by this lad. Great verse!

  11. Ah!! The kiss of love.. and if its the first kiss, then the its the sweetest tinge of unknown and then knowing the unknown... I liked the soft melody your words bring on to me...


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  12. Ah, love. A masterpiece, Poetryman, a masterpiece!


  13. such a captivating expression you have placed in this piece...lovely write. ~ Rose